tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2214911829909056122.post8196062076467382868..comments2011-02-04T11:30:14.977-08:00Comments on 7th grade science: Tristan Fuller 5David Buthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02284793524525845880noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2214911829909056122.post-34524624001143757752009-11-23T09:15:59.290-08:002009-11-23T09:15:59.290-08:00Tristan, that was amazing!
The awesome word choice...Tristan, that was amazing!<br />The awesome word choice and informative sentances worked perfectly. It was good that you included that they are not all bad, and that they can be very useful.<br />The first sentance is good, but it is sort of off topic.<br />Great job!<br />:)Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14063319715673278595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2214911829909056122.post-60394908736676372632009-11-23T09:09:30.247-08:002009-11-23T09:09:30.247-08:00By:Audrey
like Lindsey said your first sentence d...By:Audrey <br />like Lindsey said your first sentence does not make sense? Don't include the parenthesis around the words (they don't make sense).Also refrain from putting in the Japanese it might confuse people. Good legth! I like the varied word choice. You filled all the requirement for the rubric you have a nice report over all.David Buthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02284793524525845880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2214911829909056122.post-31771689408691711812009-11-23T08:46:07.186-08:002009-11-23T08:46:07.186-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15954510262640091977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2214911829909056122.post-18319540142142271542009-11-23T08:45:03.352-08:002009-11-23T08:45:03.352-08:00Tristan,
The first sentance doesnt make sense. You...Tristan,<br />The first sentance doesnt make sense. Your word choice is very exquisit. Your organization is very great and it seems like you filled out all the expectasions for the project.<br />Awesome Job!<br />-Lindsey :)Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15954510262640091977noreply@blogger.com